Thursday, January 19, 2023

Class Notes–Week 2 (January 19)

 We made it to class despite the snowy weather, and it was good to see everyone’s smiling faces.

As usual, we started with our Quick Write using a combinations prompt options that both the class and I have written:


  • I wouldn't be me without…

  • Write about a scar that tells a cool story.

  • What five adjectives describe your personality?

  • How would you like to “show up” to others?  What five adjectives would you like other people to describe you with?  How do you desire others to experience your personality?

  • Remember your prompt from last week?  Take the same character you invented and answer questions 1-3 from their point of view.

  • Whatever???


Our Words of the Day were a combination of the ones I brought and one that Grace brought.  I asked students to submit their Words of the Day to me in advance, provide the definition, etymology and an example sentence and they can have some extra credit.  Though today’s submission was a bit obscure, the Word of the Day should be a word that is interesting, but not too strange.  In other words, it should be a word that could be used in conversation, or perhaps our writing.

Students recorded these Words in their Writing 2 Notebooks.


abscond (v)

Definition:  To depart quickly and in secret, especially to avoid criminal charges.

Etymology:  Latin–ab=off or away from; -condere=put together; store

Example:  The bank robbers immediately absconded to Mexico with the money.


Nefarious (adj)

Definition:  Evil, reprehensible

Etymology:  Latin-ne-not and fas=right; first used in 1609

Example:  Because of the nefarious nature of this crime, I am forced to pass a stern sentence.


Arachibutyrophobia (n)

Definition:  fear of peanut butter sticking to the roof of your mouth.


The usual Agenda for the class time is to do these beginning of class activities and then most of the time we cover these topics in this order:  Writing assignments/instruction, Literature discussion, and Grammar instruction/work.  


For our Writing discussion, I checked in with them about the progress of their Mystery StoriesThe Pre-Writes and Rough Drafts are due next week. We discussed for a bit how writing this story will take a different kind of planning.  Students are thinking about putting in clues and even red herrings.  I am really looking forward to reading their stories next week!  By the way, if students want to read some student-written stories, they can go to the Writing 2 blog, and the stories are listed on the right hand margin


To that end, there may be some characters using dialogue.  We had a mini-lesson on using quotation marks.  They worked in pairs on a worksheet.  There is a Dialogue Quiz posted on Google Classroom–watch the video, then answer the questions.


After that, I divided the class into two groups and we had a discussion of the first two Sherlock Holmes stories that were assigned and they played the game "Enter the Mystery Mansion."  Students were given cards with pictures, and as a group, they were to compose a mystery and/or spy story.  When they were done, a story was shared to the whole group..  They were quite creative!


The last part of class was for Grammar instruction.  Today, I did a short lesson on simple and compound subjects and predicates along with compound sentences.  I often use fairly simple sentences to illustrate the concepts, but then we take these concepts and apply them to the students' own writing. They had some time to get started on these worksheets at the end of the class.


Homework

Mystery Story PreWrite

Mystery Story Rough Draft

Dialogue Mini Lesson

Dialogue Quiz

Grammar:  Commas & Coord. Conjunctions & KEY

Grammar:  Is It a Compound Sentence & KEY

Grammar:  Writing Compound Sentences


Links for this Week

Quick Write

About the Mystery Story

Discussion Questions for “A Scandal in Bohemia” & “Red Headed League” (in class discussion)

Class Summary Video (if absent)


Thursday, January 12, 2023

Writing 2 Class Notes--Week 1 (January 12)

 Greetings!

Today is  National Stick to your Resolutions Day. For our Quick Write today, we talked about the word “resolve”--which means to reach a firm decision about something.  We watched a short section from a Studio C clip where the main character shared his New Year’s resolutions:  he is a thief–and therein lies the humor!   I challenged the class to make up a character and write a New Year’s Resolution list for them.  They could also opt for sharing their resolutions or sharing an opinion on Resolutions.


Our first order of business was organizational.  I have tweaked a few things since last semester and we talked about those: 


  • We previewed this semester Syllabus and Homework Checklist.  Students saw what Literature we would be reading and also how many and the types of Essays that will be assigned.  This gives us a map for moving forward.

  • In Semester 2, I will be much stricter on Deadlines.  We reviewed my Late Homework policy.

  • Also, in Semester 2, I will be much stricter about phones in the classroom.  For most students this hasn’t been a problem, but I want to be upfront.  My desire is to keep this class as distraction-free as possible.  As per CHAT policy, if I see a phone out, it will be turned into me until the end of the class.  If it’s a problem after that, I will take it for the entire day.  It can be picked up at the end of the day.  In both cases, parents will be contacted.

  •  Because of the nature of my Gradebook set up, I have chosen to forego most Extra Credit assignments from here on out.  As stated above, Words of the Day will be our only Extra Credit opportunity this semester.  

  • I distributed blank notebooks for students to use for the class from now on.  We divided it into 3 parts:  Notes, Annotations and Words of the Day (no more index cards!)  Each section has its own tabs.

  • When we take notes, they will go in there; when handouts are given, they can be attached there (use tape or glue.).  Annotations, which we will be using for close reading and class discussions will also “live” there.

 

We did not have any Words of the Day, but students can bring them to class for us to enjoy.  (The only extra credit offered.)  For the rest of the semester, students can bring in interesting words for our weekly Words of the Day part of our discussion.  For these words, they also need to include the etymology and a definition.  

 

The first topic we covered was our first Writing assignment -- a Mystery Story.  This is an opportunity to get clever and creative.  We didn’t talk at length about the characteristics of a Detective story, but there is a document on Google Classroom.  A piece of advice is to start the story at the end.  In other words, know how it will resolve and work backwards.  The Pre-Write and Rough Draft are due in 2 weeks on January 26.

 

Next on the agenda was our first book for the semester.  This semester we will be reading 6 Sherlock Holmes stories by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.  Many are familiar with the BBC show Sherlock, which takes some of the original stories and gives them a 21st century interpretation.  In our pre-reading discussion we discussed the elements for a detective novel.  I'm looking forward to hearing their impressions of the original stories.  [NOTE:  Most of these stories can be found as audioversions on Youtube or Librivox. Feel free to listen to the stories.]

 

Last semester in the Grammar portion of the class we covered types of phrases, including verbal phrases.  This semester, we will be all about the comma (and a few other bits of punctuation.  I find that to fully understand comma rules, a writer must understand basics about other facets of sentence writing.  In other words, I'm using the comma as an avenue to teach other aspects of grammar.  As with last semester, students must correct their own worksheets and hand them in with corrections.  I must see clear evidence of that, or the assignment will get a zero.  

 

Glad to be back in the classroom with these great students!  See you all next week!

 

Homework

-- Read "The Scandal in Bohemia" and "The Redheaded League"

-- 4 Study Guide Questions

2 Quotes per story in Writing 2 Notebook

-- Spring Writing Survey

-- Start working on the Mystery Story

-- Mystery Story PreWrite & Rough Draft

-- Grammar -- Compound & FANBOYS

-- Grammar -- Compound Sentences & Commas

-- Simple or Compound Sentences

 

 

Links for This Week

Writing 2 Syllabus

Writing 2 Assignments Checklist

Homework & Late Guidelines

About the Mystery Story

Characteristics of a Detective Story

Comma Reference Sheets

 


Friday, December 9, 2022

Class Notes–Week 14 (December 8)

We had a wonderful day in class today.  A lot of the hard work of the semester is over, so our "work" today was a little more fun.

Quick Write

We had the opportunity to write about a memorable gift you have given or received.

 

Writing

I handed back the rough drafts of their Comparison/Contrast Essays.  I really enjoyed reading these; they've chosen some fascinating topics, and they're becoming better writers.  The final drafts are due next week. 

 

Grammar

The class was assigned a Fall Grammar Test about parts of speech and verbal phrases posted on Google Classroom..  We had some time and played a Phrases Review Matching game to prepare.  They can use their notes to answer the questions at home.The best way of learning grammar is through lots of reading and writing. Direct instruction of grammar is important and helpful, and combined with literature and writing it can be pretty potent.  Next semester we'll be working on commas!

 

Literature

We had some more presentations today.  Each one of them showed not only that the students had a good grasp on the details of our book, My Antonia, but they also had a strong understanding of the themes and motifs of the book.  We saw a diorama, a travel brochure, a 20 Year Life Plan and some fantastic drawings inspired by the book. Phoebe made a Jeopardy style review game which we will play next week.

 

Also had some time to discuss the themes of “Pioneers!  Oh Pioneers” by Walt Whitman which had been assigned to read last week.  It was interesting to draw some parallels between that famous work and My Antonia.

 

Next Week

Our last week of the semester is next week, December 15.  All work should be handed in by that date.  They should not wait until then to do their work and hand it in.  Next week we will have our "Class-mas Party."  I will bring warm drinks, and students can bring goodies if they like. (Please label if there are allergens.)  We will have a contest, play a Review Game, and other games too. 

 

Assignments for Next Week:

Quick Write (12/9)

Discussion Question–Improved!

Comparison/Contrast Essay Final Draft

Presentation Self Evaluation

Fall Grammar Test


Sunday, December 4, 2022

Class Notes–Week 13 (Dec. 1)

 We are really seeing wrapping up our Writing 2 class, and I hope the denouement has been satisfying.  (Did you like that sentence featuring a Word of the Day??!?)


Quick Write

Today’s prompt had to do with courage.  We read a quote by Rosa Parks and had a short discussion about courage and standing up for what’s right–even when it may be unpopular.


Words of the Day

We had no Words of the Day today.  Instead, students were given a few minutes to review the notecards they have accumulated in class–15 so far.  After that, they played a game of “Who Wants to Be a Millionaire” in four teams.  They found some of the clues challenging as they were asked not only about the definitions, but the etymology and correct usage.  This was a great review for the Words of the Day Quiz they were assigned on Google Classroom for this week..


Writing

The Comparison/Contrast Rough Draft and Pre-Writes were due today.  Make sure you get those in with time enough for me to review them.  You’ll want enough time to make your revisions before the end of the semester.  The Finals are due December 15–the last day of class.


Literature

Today we had a full day of My Antonia Book Presentations.  As last week, each had a few minutes to present them and explain how their projects tied in with the novel. These students showed great creativity and we had a wide-ranging collection of presentations.   There were ttwo “Books in Bags'' from Nick and Jaedyn, posters by Carmela, fashion design by Grace, a fun (and hard!) exam written by Keira.  Andrew shared a playlist, Megan presented a diorama of a winter scene, and Brooke shared a nostalgic glimpse at her own life 20 years from now.


Next week we’ll finish up and hear presentations from Rachel, Chase, Ike, Phoebe and Will.


The famous poem “Pioneers!  Oh Pioneers!” by Walt Whitman was assigned.  Students should enjoy the poem and then answer the discussion question.  We will discuss this poem in class next week, so be prepared!


Blessings on your week.

Mrs. G


Homework

Words of the Day Quiz (GC)

Comparison/Contrast Essay Prewrite

Comparison/Contrast  Rough Draft

Read “Pioneers!  Oh Pioneers!”

Discussion Question on “Pioneers!  Oh Pioneers!”


Links for this Week

QuickWrite (12/1)

“Who Wants to Be A Millionaire” Words of the Day Review


Thursday, November 17, 2022

Writing 2 Class Notes (Week 12)--November 17


Today was another full day.  Hard to believe we are already at Thanksgiving break!


Quick Write

Today’s Quick Write was Thanksgiving inspired.  The class read a poem by Billy Collins called “The Gathering–A Thanksgiving Poem” and responded. I also asked them to contribute to a list of Quick Write ideas to be used for the rest of the year.


Words of The Day

Today’s word is also Thanksgiving inspired:

Repast:  (noun)  A meal, or the food eaten or provided at a meal.  Students listed their highlights and lowlights (if any) of their Thanksgiving repast.


Homework Check

A reminder to students:  make sure you correct your grammar worksheets and show on the worksheet or the Google Classroom assignment that you're corrected it.  Also, make sure you turn in assignments that you've done on Google Classroom.  A number of assignments have been finished, but students have forgotten to turn the work in.


Literature Discussion

We started with our My Antonia book project presentations.  We had some motivational posters, an explanation of period fashions, and a Christmas wish list (slideshow) for Jim.  Naomi, Eva and Sarah did great work.  We even had a Writing 2 alum come and sing the song she composed for her My Antonia project last year.   After Thanksgiving, we'll have presentations from Andrew, Nick, Jaedyn, Brooke, Megan, Will, Johnny, Carmela, Grace.  As part of the project, students need to fill out a self-evaluation rubric about what they think of their own work.  (See the link below.)


At the end of the class, we had a chance to read two examples of "Praire Poetry". Students read the poems in groups and then discussed what stood out and how these poems connect to My Antonia.

 

Writing Discussion

Students have been assigned another essay -- a Comparison/Contrast Essay.  The Pre-Write and Rough Draft are due the week after Thanksgiving break.  We did some brainstorming about how to organize a Comparison/Contrast Essay.  In pairs, students were given an introduction and they needed to find the thesis and organize the essay using one of the organizational plans we discussed.  (This in-class assignment was worth extra credit points!)

 

Grammar

For homework, students are to complete a Phrases Review, which is posted as a Google Form on Google Classroom.


Homework Links

Quick Write

Comparison/Contrast RD

Comparison/Contrast Pre-Write 

My Antonia Self-Evaluation Rubric (if you presented)

Phrases Review/Quiz


Links for this Week

About the Comparison/Contrast Essay

Class Summary video (for those absent)

PrairiePoetry


Happy Thanksgiving!!

 

Thursday, November 10, 2022

Class Notes–Nov. 10 (WK 11)

 We had an engaging and quick-paced class once again today.  Students are working well and we are accomplishing so much.  We can all be proud of ourselves.


Quick Write

I asked students to respond to a prompt about the concept and word “solace”.  They were to think about a time they received solace when they went through a difficult time.  What was it?  Today’s writing led to some rich discussion and reflection.


Word of the Day

“Denouement” is the word of the day today–appropriate because we have recently finished our latest novel.  It means the resolution of a plot following its climax; the wrapping up or outcome of any complex series of events–especially in literature/film/theater.  It can also mean the unraveling of understanding the details underlying arguments between friends.  

The etymology is fromLatin=nodus=knot; French=+de=”untying of a knot” (1752). 

Students were asked to “make it stick” in their brains by answering a question about the denouement of the plot of their recent novels.  Was it satisfying?




Writing

The final drafts of the Extended Definition or Classification Essay were due this week, and we're on to the next essay -- a Comparison/Contrast Essay.  For the rest of the essays that they will write for Writing 2, students will write a Pre-Write, Rough Draft, and Final Draft.  I have the Pre-Write "due" next week because I want students to take the week to plan and research for their essays.  However, they don't have to hand in the pre-writes until they hand in the rough drafts, which will be on December 1 (3 weeks from this week.)

 

Grammar

This week's Grammar discussion centered on Indicative and Subjunctive moods of verbs.  We have been examining different aspects of verbs–phrases (prepositional, gerunds, infinitives and participle.  We have considered voice–passive/active.  Today we looked at mood–indicative and subjunctive.   We watched a video and took notes together (Extra credit opportunity!).  Students can finish the notes at home while watch the video for those extra credit points. Subjunctive worksheet is due next week.

 

Literature

Due to circumstances beyond my control, we had to re-take the My Antonia Final Test here in class.  This time on paper.  While it is not my preference to take precious class time to take a test, I do want to ensure students are interacting with the text and have a good handle on the material.  

 

The class was assigned to read the opening paragraphs of Giants on the Earth and an excerpt of The Grapes of Wrath for next week.  They are to answer discussion questions on those readings before class next week.

 




Homework

Ext. Def/Class. Rough Draft (if not done)

Ext. Def/Class. Final Draft (if not done)

First Five Corrections (if not done)

Comparison/Contrast Essay Pre-Write (work on for 11/17; due with RD 12/1)

Giants on the Earth & Writing Assign.

The Grapes of Wrath & Discussion question

Subjunctive Worksheet,  video and Extra Credit Notes


Links for this Week

Quick Write

About the Comparison/Contrast Essay



Enjoy the changing of the season!

Warmly,

Amanda Gonsalves aka Mrs. G


Friday, November 4, 2022

November 3–Week 10

 We had a full class today–but we do every week!


Quick Write

This week, we had a Quick Write on a colorful topic!  After thinking of our favorite color, we watched a brief video on what different colors symbolize.  Then students wrote about what they think of when the color yellow comes to mind..  Do certain colors carry certain meanings for them?


We had a homework check. Grade Reports were sent last week. Here are the points we talked about:

  •  If students have missing homework, they can consult the Late Homework policy and hand it in as soon as possible.  Those points really make a difference!  

  • Once an essay (Rough Draft/Final)  has been submitted and graded, it is final.  

  • In order to receive credit for Grammar worksheets, students MUST use their KEY to correct their own work.  You must SHOW your work in order to receive the points going forward.  So much learning goes on when you correct your own work –it is a valuable part of your self-education in which each student must invest.

  • I scheduled student presentations for the My Antonia Project Presentation.  Students have already chosen a topic and present their projects on Nov. 17, Dec. 1, 8.  Students would be working on their projects and be ready to explain them (about 2-3 minutes) to the class.  We discussed the rubric I will be using to grade their work.

 


Words of the Day

We had NO Words of the Day this week as it was a full class and I wanted to leave room for it all.  We’ll get back on the train next week.


Grammar

For today’s grammar discussion, we segued away from the verbal phrases we’ve been learning about and are doing a little detour to discuss active and passive voice.  We talked about the fact that our writing is almost always improved when we use active voice.  It’s more clear, exciting and concise.  However, there are times when we need to use passive voice:  when the force of the actio/actor  is unclear, and when you intentionally choose to be vague.  A good example is when you want to avoid referring to yourself (using I, me, we pronouns) in academic writing.


We talked through a Google Slides presentation on Active/Passive voice, identified how to tell which voice is being used, and wrote sentences using the two voices based on model sentences and a video clip.  Students interacted well with this material and were assigned two worksheets to solidify their understanding.  As a bonus, I gave out Extra Credit points for taking notes on this presentation!


Writing

If students handed in their Extended Definition/Classification Essay Rough Drafts, they were graded and handed back last week.  They should fill out their First 5 Corrections (Mistakes) as they are editing and hand that in next week.  Extended Definition/Classification Final Drafts are due next week as well.


Today, the class took part in their second Writing Circle DIscussion.  They read some sample introductions and broke into groups to discuss the merits and weaknesses of the introductions. I asked them to especially look at the hook, “road map” and if the writer’s opinion was clear.  


They also discussed how confident they felt about different aspects of Grammar.  They took a Grammar Inventory and discussed what areas are strengths and weaknesses.


Literature

We did not have a full discussion of the ending of My Antonia today.  Some members of the class expressed disappointment in the ending and felt there were some loose ends that never got “tied up.”  I’d hope we can delve a little deeper into that next week.  In the meantime, students should take the My Antonia Final Exam (on Google Classroom).  They should also be continuing to work on their Book Projects.


Homework

Active to Passive Voice

Passive to Active Voice

Writing Circle #2 and Grammar Inventory

First 5 Corrections

Ext.Def/Class. Final Draft 

My Antonia Final Exam


Links for the Week

My Antonia Project Presentation Rubric

Quick Write

Colors video


Thoughts about Grades

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