Thursday, January 26, 2023

Writing 2 Class Notes--Week 3 (January 26)

 Greetings!


Today’s QuickWrite prompts are taken from the list that the students in Writing 1 and Writing 2 contributed to last fall.  Here are the prompts for today’s Quick Write


  • Where do you see yourself in five years

  • Write one story you can’t stop yourself from laughing about everytime you think of it.

  • A time of awkwardness/embarrassment

  • If you dropped out of school and started a business what would it be 

  • If you could only have three Apps on your phone, what would they be?  Why?

  • Whatever …..


Today we had 3 Words of the Day:


Tenacious:  Definition: Qualtiy that does not stop holding something or give up something easily; determined

Etymology:  early 17th cent.: from Latin tenax, tenac- (from tenere ‘to hold’) + -ious.

Example:  She's a tenacious student. She never gives up.


charisma

Definition: the powerful personal quality that some people have to attract and impress other people

adj=charismatic

Etymology:  from Greek kharisma, from kharis ‘favour, grace’.

Example:  She relaxed and her natural charisma started to shine through.


benevolent

Definition:  (especially of people in authority) kind, helpful and generous

Opposite:  malevolent

Etymology:   Latin bene volent- ‘well wishing’, from bene ‘well’ + velle ‘to wish’.

Example:  The colonel was benevolent, but not stupid.


Students have handed in the Pre-Writes and Rough Drafts of their Mystery Stories.  Many of them enjoyed writing these and felt that they wrote more than they usually wrote.  Others felt that this writing assignment was a bit harder since it's not easy to be creative.  This kind of writing required some different planning and a different kind of thinking.  I am looking forward to curling up with a cup of coffee and reading my pile of Mystery Rough Drafts.  


We are 4 stories into our book of Sherlock Holmes mysteries, and the consensus this week was that the "Speckled Band" was more interesting than "The Engineer's Thumb."  We brainstormed some adjectives that describe Sherlock Holmes’ character and their assignment is to think more deeply on that subject as we approach the end of this unit.  

iMost students agreed that there was something satisfying about following clues and deducing solutions.  Someone mentioned the "red herrings" in the story about the speckled band.   These false clues and distractions add another layer of interest. 


 To that end, our class embarked on a Classroom Mystery Game–like a game of live-action Clue.  Together we read the scenario:  “Local Popular Girls Mysteriously Injured at Generic High School!” Students were given a map, a clue sheet and they were each assigned a character to play.  They began to circulate and ask each other questions in order to solve the mystery.  There are plenty of clues and red-herrings, so it won’t be easy!  We were only able to begin this game, so we will finish it next week.  They seemed to really engage in this activity and I saw some great acting in progress!  Remember:  No talking about the Mystery outside of Writing 2!!


For the Grammar portion of class, we worked again on complex sentences.  In our unit on Commas, we also need to learn about sentence structures.  You won't understand where the comma goes with regards to dependent clauses in complex sentences if you don't know what a complex sentence is.  You won't know the difference between an independent and dependent/subordinate clause if you don't understand what the essential elements of a sentence are.  All of grammar is interconnected, and the students are doing a great job at working to understand these intricacies.  We watched an Edpuzzle video and answered questions as a class about Simple, Compound and Complex sentences.


Assignments for Next Week:

 

Links for This Week

Video, audio, and pdf versions of "The Final Problem"

Video, audio, and pdf versions of "The Empty House"


Have a great weekend!

Mrs. G


Thursday, January 19, 2023

Class Notes–Week 2 (January 19)

 We made it to class despite the snowy weather, and it was good to see everyone’s smiling faces.

As usual, we started with our Quick Write using a combinations prompt options that both the class and I have written:


  • I wouldn't be me without…

  • Write about a scar that tells a cool story.

  • What five adjectives describe your personality?

  • How would you like to “show up” to others?  What five adjectives would you like other people to describe you with?  How do you desire others to experience your personality?

  • Remember your prompt from last week?  Take the same character you invented and answer questions 1-3 from their point of view.

  • Whatever???


Our Words of the Day were a combination of the ones I brought and one that Grace brought.  I asked students to submit their Words of the Day to me in advance, provide the definition, etymology and an example sentence and they can have some extra credit.  Though today’s submission was a bit obscure, the Word of the Day should be a word that is interesting, but not too strange.  In other words, it should be a word that could be used in conversation, or perhaps our writing.

Students recorded these Words in their Writing 2 Notebooks.


abscond (v)

Definition:  To depart quickly and in secret, especially to avoid criminal charges.

Etymology:  Latin–ab=off or away from; -condere=put together; store

Example:  The bank robbers immediately absconded to Mexico with the money.


Nefarious (adj)

Definition:  Evil, reprehensible

Etymology:  Latin-ne-not and fas=right; first used in 1609

Example:  Because of the nefarious nature of this crime, I am forced to pass a stern sentence.


Arachibutyrophobia (n)

Definition:  fear of peanut butter sticking to the roof of your mouth.


The usual Agenda for the class time is to do these beginning of class activities and then most of the time we cover these topics in this order:  Writing assignments/instruction, Literature discussion, and Grammar instruction/work.  


For our Writing discussion, I checked in with them about the progress of their Mystery StoriesThe Pre-Writes and Rough Drafts are due next week. We discussed for a bit how writing this story will take a different kind of planning.  Students are thinking about putting in clues and even red herrings.  I am really looking forward to reading their stories next week!  By the way, if students want to read some student-written stories, they can go to the Writing 2 blog, and the stories are listed on the right hand margin


To that end, there may be some characters using dialogue.  We had a mini-lesson on using quotation marks.  They worked in pairs on a worksheet.  There is a Dialogue Quiz posted on Google Classroom–watch the video, then answer the questions.


After that, I divided the class into two groups and we had a discussion of the first two Sherlock Holmes stories that were assigned and they played the game "Enter the Mystery Mansion."  Students were given cards with pictures, and as a group, they were to compose a mystery and/or spy story.  When they were done, a story was shared to the whole group..  They were quite creative!


The last part of class was for Grammar instruction.  Today, I did a short lesson on simple and compound subjects and predicates along with compound sentences.  I often use fairly simple sentences to illustrate the concepts, but then we take these concepts and apply them to the students' own writing. They had some time to get started on these worksheets at the end of the class.


Homework

Mystery Story PreWrite

Mystery Story Rough Draft

Dialogue Mini Lesson

Dialogue Quiz

Grammar:  Commas & Coord. Conjunctions & KEY

Grammar:  Is It a Compound Sentence & KEY

Grammar:  Writing Compound Sentences


Links for this Week

Quick Write

About the Mystery Story

Discussion Questions for “A Scandal in Bohemia” & “Red Headed League” (in class discussion)

Class Summary Video (if absent)


Thursday, January 12, 2023

Writing 2 Class Notes--Week 1 (January 12)

 Greetings!

Today is  National Stick to your Resolutions Day. For our Quick Write today, we talked about the word “resolve”--which means to reach a firm decision about something.  We watched a short section from a Studio C clip where the main character shared his New Year’s resolutions:  he is a thief–and therein lies the humor!   I challenged the class to make up a character and write a New Year’s Resolution list for them.  They could also opt for sharing their resolutions or sharing an opinion on Resolutions.


Our first order of business was organizational.  I have tweaked a few things since last semester and we talked about those: 


  • We previewed this semester Syllabus and Homework Checklist.  Students saw what Literature we would be reading and also how many and the types of Essays that will be assigned.  This gives us a map for moving forward.

  • In Semester 2, I will be much stricter on Deadlines.  We reviewed my Late Homework policy.

  • Also, in Semester 2, I will be much stricter about phones in the classroom.  For most students this hasn’t been a problem, but I want to be upfront.  My desire is to keep this class as distraction-free as possible.  As per CHAT policy, if I see a phone out, it will be turned into me until the end of the class.  If it’s a problem after that, I will take it for the entire day.  It can be picked up at the end of the day.  In both cases, parents will be contacted.

  •  Because of the nature of my Gradebook set up, I have chosen to forego most Extra Credit assignments from here on out.  As stated above, Words of the Day will be our only Extra Credit opportunity this semester.  

  • I distributed blank notebooks for students to use for the class from now on.  We divided it into 3 parts:  Notes, Annotations and Words of the Day (no more index cards!)  Each section has its own tabs.

  • When we take notes, they will go in there; when handouts are given, they can be attached there (use tape or glue.).  Annotations, which we will be using for close reading and class discussions will also “live” there.

 

We did not have any Words of the Day, but students can bring them to class for us to enjoy.  (The only extra credit offered.)  For the rest of the semester, students can bring in interesting words for our weekly Words of the Day part of our discussion.  For these words, they also need to include the etymology and a definition.  

 

The first topic we covered was our first Writing assignment -- a Mystery Story.  This is an opportunity to get clever and creative.  We didn’t talk at length about the characteristics of a Detective story, but there is a document on Google Classroom.  A piece of advice is to start the story at the end.  In other words, know how it will resolve and work backwards.  The Pre-Write and Rough Draft are due in 2 weeks on January 26.

 

Next on the agenda was our first book for the semester.  This semester we will be reading 6 Sherlock Holmes stories by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.  Many are familiar with the BBC show Sherlock, which takes some of the original stories and gives them a 21st century interpretation.  In our pre-reading discussion we discussed the elements for a detective novel.  I'm looking forward to hearing their impressions of the original stories.  [NOTE:  Most of these stories can be found as audioversions on Youtube or Librivox. Feel free to listen to the stories.]

 

Last semester in the Grammar portion of the class we covered types of phrases, including verbal phrases.  This semester, we will be all about the comma (and a few other bits of punctuation.  I find that to fully understand comma rules, a writer must understand basics about other facets of sentence writing.  In other words, I'm using the comma as an avenue to teach other aspects of grammar.  As with last semester, students must correct their own worksheets and hand them in with corrections.  I must see clear evidence of that, or the assignment will get a zero.  

 

Glad to be back in the classroom with these great students!  See you all next week!

 

Homework

-- Read "The Scandal in Bohemia" and "The Redheaded League"

-- 4 Study Guide Questions

2 Quotes per story in Writing 2 Notebook

-- Spring Writing Survey

-- Start working on the Mystery Story

-- Mystery Story PreWrite & Rough Draft

-- Grammar -- Compound & FANBOYS

-- Grammar -- Compound Sentences & Commas

-- Simple or Compound Sentences

 

 

Links for This Week

Writing 2 Syllabus

Writing 2 Assignments Checklist

Homework & Late Guidelines

About the Mystery Story

Characteristics of a Detective Story

Comma Reference Sheets

 


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